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Fluid
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Registered: September 2005
Posts: 417
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29-3-2006 13:32
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Rating: 10.00
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Nice layout. Not too much and it has a lot of bling. Only thing I might change would be reversing the blend in the "Unlimited Toppind Deal". Reversing would make it pop off the background a lil more and bring more attention to the actual Deal.
Nice job.
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stetro
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Registered: August 2005
Posts: 96
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29-3-2006 13:45
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Rating: 8.00
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Nice work overall but man...
The flyer is more than alldressed!!! (probably what the client wanted though)
There's lots of "titles" everywhere...it's hard to make out WHERE the pizza's from! I would of put a little more accent on the restaurant's name though.
So that people recongnize it more...
Probably folded up would be easier to read...
Sometimes a little bit of "out of bound" elements give clients an impression
that things are on sale and deals are to be made.
Usually in this type of publicity you get to see other graphic artists
dressing their flyers with 15 to 20 different fonts...but here there's not too many...Congrats on that!
By the way...NO BRUSH SCRIPT.ttf!!! YYEESSSSSSSS!!!!
Your color are great though! Really matches with the "PIZZA" look...
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kenpoist
Senior Member
Registered: December 2005
Posts: 164
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Nice work Jeff.
I have to agree with Richard on reversing the blend in the title.
I'm trying to make money with Corel really and I'm out there (at least my wife thinks so LOL), however, I've never been approached by anyone for me to create packaging for their food stuffs.
They just want me to buy it. 
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Jeff Harrison
Senior Member
Registered: April 2005
Posts: 362
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Thanks Guys!
Actually it turns out that I need to make significant changes.. again... they want to add a bunch more stuff. Yikes! Oh well, it's paid time but it's going to be tricky.
I'll tweak the text you all thought was weak too.
Once it's folded together this thing makes more sense...
Stephan, what do you mean by "out of bounds?'
You're right, 10+ fonts in the same document... I bet it causes epilespy in lab rats!
Brush script... LOL.. :-)
the font of the year out here for the moment is rage italic. Every newbie uses it for everything.
Also stretching & squashing fonts. I avoid that.
Ken, you're a star, you have amazing work that sells yourself.
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